Around me I see the ocean, Theirs the little town of Avalon, No nothing. Around me theirs no wind, not a breeze, Theirs no bugs flying over my head, Not a single one, But theirs nothing And theirs everything
I love the peace and serenity of your poem! You should definitely print this out and put it next to your chosen photograph. When you print it out, change the 'theirs' to 'there' and 'there's'. You are a natural poet!
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I love the peace and serenity of your poem! You should definitely print this out and put it next to your chosen photograph. When you print it out, change the 'theirs' to 'there' and 'there's'. You are a natural poet!
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